The essay "Filling Station Analysis" had a clearly defined thesis which was properly stated in the first paragraph of the essay.
The three supporting body paragraphs should have included more details about the poem which would have allowed the reader to have a better understanding of the poem itself.
The quotations in the third paragraph could have been analyzed more in depth to give further support to the thesis.
The spelling and punctuation were appropriate.
The conclusion is supportive of the thesis but needs to be lengthened.
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